Why I Love a Poem

A poem has eyes that open and close like windows, 
or gills on an airborne fish.
A poem has waves that rise and crash and go back
taking our sand
like grains of time
that transform into deep receding shore
longing, looking, naked
needing more than what it had
that was taken by chance and nature
or not?
A poem must hit the spot
and leave us sound and sore—
closing ears to slamming doors.

June 5, 2016
for That's Why I Love Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Cheema Avatar
June 7, 2016 at 9:22 AM
Congrats Rita and beautiful imageries of gills and waves!
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 6, 2016 at 10:08 PM
This is beautiful Rita! Poetry must inspire as this one does! Congratulations on your HM! ; )
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