Ann Gilmour Poet Rhyme

Why - I Ask

Each day as I awaken for to see your smiling face
It brings a tear my darling boy for you’re no longer here
My only son I miss you so ~ you were my only child
Were you told and did you know that fateful day you had to go
You were taken far too soon son ~ taken without warning
Why ~ I ask each day as I awaken every brand new dawning

Written 12th July 2021

Contest A BRIAN STRAND JULY 13
Sponsor Brian Strand 
FIRST PLACE

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Sara Kendrick July 17, 2021 at 2:10 PM Emotive and expressive winner. I can feel your pain. Congrats on this winner. Sara Ann Gilmour July 24, 2021 at 5:05 AM Thank you dear Sara xx

Christuraj Alex July 12, 2021 at 11:32 PM Attractive title and beautiful write. Ann Gilmour July 24, 2021 at 5:05 AM Thank you dear Christuraj xx

Victor Buhagiar July 12, 2021 at 11:29 PM To lose a son at such a young age is no joke, Time takes longer to console yourself. Hugs. Ann Gilmour July 24, 2021 at 5:04 AM it is truly devastating Victor... with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Jan Allison July 12, 2021 at 3:09 PM your grief is still so raw Ann, thinking of you my friend:-) hugs jan xx Ann Gilmour July 12, 2021 at 10:06 PM Bless you dear Jan and thank you for your kind thoughts. Hugs Ann xx

Tom Cunningham July 12, 2021 at 2:37 PM The pain of loss is so hard to bear Ann, we look for answers but they seem to fall on deaf ears. Hope you're well. Tom Ann Gilmour July 12, 2021 at 3:00 PM Yes Tom, when I see his photo I just cannot believe he went so soon and this question always comes to mind. why and where are you? and then my tears flow. So difficult to come to terms with. With kindest thoughts Ann xx