Why I Am Who I Am

I'm thankful for my mom and dad,
And the happy childhood that I had.
We didn't have so many toys
But there were lots of other joys.

Dad was a farmer planting seeds,
To provide us with our daily needs.
Mom planted too, the seeds of love,
Germinating from up above.

She taught us how to love each other
And have respect for one another.
We've kept those feelings still today,
Though childhood days are far away.

We went to church and Sunday School
Where we were taught the Golden Rule.
So many times our mama cried,
If we were bad or if we lied.

She didn't teach without regard 
That growing up is truly hard.
We loved her and wanted to be
As gentle and as kind as she.

My brothers never made me cry,
The four of them older than I.
My gentle dad taught them to be
Protectors of my sis and me.

A child who's raised with loving care
Is a happy child beyond compare.
She'll want to share the love she knew
And teach it to her children too.

What comes around will go around
And other happy children found.
And when a better world is had,
It all started with my mom and dad.



Won 2nd place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 3/23/2014 9:58:00 AM
It is a gift to know who we are. This is one of my personal favorites in the contest. Congratulations.
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Date: 3/20/2014 1:33:00 AM
JOYCE, Congrats! Enjoyed your winning poem. Love ~SKAT~
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Date: 3/19/2014 11:48:00 PM
Joyce:).... Congratulations, in Nathan's contest... xox~ LINDA
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Date: 3/19/2014 7:40:00 AM
Wonderful poetry and congrats on the fine win, joyce
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Date: 4/1/2010 7:12:00 PM
Congrats on the win. A fine tribute to your parents
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Date: 4/1/2010 1:05:00 PM
Congrats to you dear Joyce on this beautiful poem placing 2nd! Thank you for your thoughtful congrats also. Warmest wishes, shar
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Date: 4/1/2010 12:41:00 PM
Congrats Joyce on your 2nd place win in Moses contest.. an excellent write and special win for u my friend..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 4/1/2010 11:32:00 AM
Wealth cannot be measured in material possessions, Joyce. Your mother and father gave you so much more. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/1/2010 11:03:00 AM
Loved your rhythmic rhyme flow, Joyce and your story was awesome. To quote "A child raised with loving care, Is a happy child beyond compare." Big Smiles! 'CONGRATULATIONS" Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/28/2010 11:10:00 PM
I LIKE THE WAY YOU STARTED YOUR POEM . WITH MOM & DAD. I LIKE THE WAY YOU ENDED THE POEM WITH MOM AND DAD. THAT IS A POEM INVENTED BY THE MOOD OF WANTING A GOOD POEM. nice
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Date: 3/12/2010 6:22:00 PM
Very loving parents and wonderful childhood...enjoyed reading about it...Marty
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Date: 3/12/2010 5:39:00 PM
Joyce~ It sounds like you had a wonderful childhood filled with many sweet memories, I loved this wonderful poem! I really loved the last line! Laura :)
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