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Why I Am Me

Why I am me, because of Thee. He wanted me this way, for today. I have lived in many places, I have seen many faces. His face is what I want to see, in the clouds and in the big blue sea. He made me a girl, with many a curl. Then a mom, so I could read a psalm. If I had a wish what would it be, that He and I could have tea. Date Written:8/23/2021

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Sierra Chen

Date: 12/9/2021 11:17:00 AM

Brilliant Well done

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/10/2021 7:57:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you like my write. Have a great/blessed day writing away...................

Joanna Daniel

Date: 9/2/2021 1:40:00 AM

Yes, it would be so good to see His face, we all live in that blessed hope:) nice sonnet, Paula:)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/2/2021 11:36:00 AM

Thanks for writing. Glad you like this one. Have a very blessed day...................

Susan Lawrence

Date: 8/25/2021 7:12:00 PM

Paula, Charming and sweet . I love it ! I can envision your tea party ! Blessings to you Susan :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/26/2021 8:32:00 AM

Thanks for writing. Glad you like this write. A tea party with Him. Have a very blessed day...................

Susan Ashley

Date: 8/25/2021 6:53:00 PM

Dear Paula, I am charmed by your beautiful poem. I adore your last line, such a grand finale for such a splendid piece! Warmest wishes, my wonderful friend.. ~Susan

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/26/2021 8:31:00 AM

Thanks for writing. Glad you are charmed by this write. Tea with Him. Have a very blessed day...................

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 8/25/2021 11:35:00 AM

One day you shall have tea with Him, but not too soon I hope :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/25/2021 1:27:00 PM

Thanks for writing. Glad you like this one. Yes, tea with Him. All in His timing. Have a very blessed day...................

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 8/24/2021 10:48:00 AM

I think this is one of the more difficult challenges~you created a fine sonnet...Delice

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/25/2021 1:25:00 PM

Thanks for writing. Glad you like my sonnet write. It was not easy for me to write. I did it over a few times. Have a very blessed day...................

Jcb Brul

Date: 8/24/2021 9:23:00 AM

Such a sweet and wonderful poem…Very uniquely yours..Best wishes.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/25/2021 1:23:00 PM

Thanks for writing and for your kind words. Glad you like my write. Have a very blessed day...................

Supraja Kannan

Date: 8/24/2021 5:50:00 AM

How beautiful!!! Such a lovely relationship and you have described beautifully!!!

Supraja Kannan

Date: 8/24/2021 5:46:00 AM

How beautiful!!! Such a lovely relationship and you have described beautifully!!!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/25/2021 1:22:00 PM

Thanks for writing. Glad you think it is a beautiful write. Yes, a blessed relationship. Have a very blessed day...................

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/24/2021 1:04:00 AM

Good thing this poem is not about me. I'm too moody these days. Your poem is beautiful though. Best for a win.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/25/2021 1:19:00 PM

Thanks for writing. Glad you think it is a beautiful write. Do I see "Best for a win"??? That sounds heavenly. Hope you are right. Everyone has their moody days. That is OK. Look for joy. Have a very blessed day...................