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Why Do You Try When I'M Done?

Why you try when I'm done? Why do I feel numb and then you realize how dumb? Its always when I let you in You treat me like your rubbish bin Why you try when I'm done? I leave you cold, you bend and fold Its intermittent and doesn't last It seems to die way too fast I hope and pray, I keep the faith I get hurt, mocked, used as bait. Why you try when I'm done? Now we're left without the other one.

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Beata Agustin

Date: 10/16/2023 8:27:00 AM

Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Karen Croft

Date: 10/14/2023 9:02:00 AM

I have felt this many times in life.

Ink Empress

Date: 10/13/2023 5:18:00 AM

I think many can resonate, ah sometimes narcissists too try when we are done, the constant push and pull is way too much. Well expressed here. I feel u