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Why Did the Fire Go Out

What happened to me What happened to you We don't remember The things we use to do No more tenderness No more bliss Cold shoulders What did we miss All I do is shout All you do is pout Cries and tears When did the fire go out

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Lindsay Laurie

Date: 8/15/2019 11:17:00 PM

G'day Timothy … too many distractions these days and usually too late when the doubt turns to realisation - thank you Timothy - Lindsay

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 8/19/2019 10:43:00 PM

It take a strong constitution to hold a relationship together at times.

Line Gauthier

Date: 8/13/2019 5:14:00 AM

Well captured, Timothy. So sad when couples lose sight of the beauty of their relationship.

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 8/13/2019 3:05:00 PM

So true Miss Line