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Where Are You Purple grass waves in the gentle breeze Violet leaves live on the tall tree White laced ivy inter-twines Light blue skies are devine Puffy clouds float by This field of rye Why can’t I See you Here

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Date: 1/20/2025 3:36:00 PM
Hey, I'm Ish. Thank u for the comment. I appreciate it. Keep up that awesome work that u r doing. I like your poems. Have a nice day.
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Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 1/20/2025 4:01:00 PM
Thanks Ish. You as well.
Date: 1/20/2025 2:04:00 PM
Very beautiful Oliver! Debx
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Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 1/20/2025 2:55:00 PM
Thank you Deb. Glad you like this

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