Why Cant I see You

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Where Are You

Purple grass waves in the gentle breeze
Violet leaves live on the tall tree
White laced ivy inter-twines
Light blue skies are devine
Puffy clouds float by
This field of rye
Why can’t I 
See you
Here

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Ish Snow

Date: 1/20/2025 3:36:00 PM

Hey, I'm Ish. Thank u for the comment. I appreciate it. Keep up that awesome work that u r doing. I like your poems. Have a nice day.

Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 1/20/2025 4:01:00 PM

Thanks Ish. You as well.

Deb M

Date: 1/20/2025 2:04:00 PM

Very beautiful Oliver! Debx

Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 1/20/2025 2:55:00 PM

Thank you Deb. Glad you like this