Why Can'T I?

I can't keep going, can't keep going on like this, they make me sick, and i get so sick of it, 
cuz they wont let me, they wont let me breath, why can't they let me be, 
why can't they let me be, why dont i know what i am, i force this      into my heart cuz its 
my only friend, my lips are sewn shut, i watch my self bleed, they push and pull and its 
killing me within
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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December 16, 2008 at 7:22 PM
she knows, but the surprise comes with where I'm gonna do it and when, and what kind of ring she gets :P will be nice though =) ...wasn't really into the idea of marriage before I met her anyways.
Petch Avatar
December 16, 2008 at 7:07 PM
aye captain, just bought the engagement ring n everything :P gonna be great =)
Montgomery Avatar
December 15, 2008 at 8:59 AM
Wow.. very good :) --Serenity
Rhinem Avatar
December 9, 2008 at 6:29 PM
"Hello Again Precious Alexandria!"~Whoever your talking about here dear? Again, don't let them get to you! Find a good Church dear~A good Bible~Read, attend, and learn to pray~Surround yourself with light~And, it shall swallow all of the darkness within your life whole, before you know it!!! I must be off now~But, I shall see you soon dear!~"Love Always, John!"~Bye Young Lady!:)
Wiggins Avatar
December 9, 2008 at 6:29 PM
Wow. I know how you feel.
Kane Jr. Avatar
December 7, 2008 at 1:14 PM
this is good. we all need to vent like this sometimes.
Payne Avatar
December 7, 2008 at 9:00 AM
Hey alexz, this is a really great poem, it's great to let all the hurt out :) Keep it up, Love, ~Michaela~
Gass Avatar
December 7, 2008 at 6:03 AM
This is a very powerful write. It's good to to let it out and write about how you feel. It is terrible to hurt and not be able to get it out at all. Keep writing. Glad you liked Lovers Call. Love Robin
Burton Avatar
December 6, 2008 at 4:53 PM
do you want to change or do you want help? no need to answer im getting off here aany way, please dont say anything sarcastic, or just dont say any thing at all.
Burton Avatar
December 6, 2008 at 4:50 PM
speechless and i see every one on here sending you positive comments, why are you still in so pain or still cant find your way out of anything.
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