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trapped in the open we are free within free will boon yet bane of what use is mind misaligned from heart the sky above firm ground below we know not yet true life purpose in silence tranquil calm truth is known we feel within God 22-October-2021

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Date: 10/23/2021 2:02:00 AM
Love the lead word which is on the bottom.
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Date: 10/23/2021 6:46:00 AM
In the cave of our heart, I’ve would have liked to add but then this form is Diminished Hexaverse :)
Date: 10/22/2021 8:47:00 AM
Excellent conclusion. When we put God aside we're heading for trouble.
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Date: 10/23/2021 6:47:00 AM
Let love drive us Victor, not fear

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