Unseeking Seeker Poet Diminished Hexaverse

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Why Are We Here

trapped in the open
we are free within
free will boon yet bane
of what use is mind
misaligned from heart

the sky above
firm ground below
we know not yet
true life purpose

in silence
tranquil calm
truth is known

we feel
within

God

22-October-2021

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Caren Krutsinger October 23, 2021 at 2:02 AM Love the lead word which is on the bottom. Unseeking Seeker October 23, 2021 at 6:46 AM In the cave of our heart, I’ve would have liked to add but then this form is Diminished Hexaverse :)

Victor Buhagiar October 22, 2021 at 8:47 AM Excellent conclusion. When we put God aside we're heading for trouble. Unseeking Seeker October 23, 2021 at 6:47 AM Let love drive us Victor, not fear