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Why am I still here

Sitting on my couch TV on Nothing on, don’t even care I take a drink of water I am now grasping for air Run to my wife hands to my throat Fear in my eyes, what do I do She sits me down, calls 911 Quick as a flash I’m in ICU Pneumonia is what they say I had The water pushed phlegm to my lungs My throat got blocked The results were bad The room across the hall His light turns blue Nurses and Drs run to his side Damn, this could have been you The scene goes quiet, not even a sound The Drs and nurses standing around Once again I am faced with the question Why does GOD keep me around

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Date: 5/6/2025 1:24:00 PM
Hello Kenneth, this is nicely written. A scary story though. Sounds so real. If it was I am glad you made through and to be writing about it. Have a wonderful day.
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Date: 3/10/2025 8:02:00 AM
I csll this poem,” fabulous “. Seems real to me. But could be could be fiction. if real, if real, we are pneumonia sister anf brother. If not, “ Why does God keeo me around?’…is a question,” I ask myself each sunrise.! Just accept it as a gift and thank your God each night. Pangie x
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Kenneth MATTOON
Date: 3/16/2025 7:19:00 PM
It is completely real. I was in the ICU when across the hall the call light came on and is was Blue. The nurse said he did in fact pass away
Date: 2/26/2025 2:42:00 PM
An interesting write! On tv or really happening? The question still in the air. (hope all is okay!)
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Kenneth MATTOON
Date: 2/26/2025 5:47:00 PM
Real life I wrote this right after the poor guy passed away

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