Why Am I Me

Why should the sun, like primrose, change its true color?
Why shouldn't each color have its own existence?
Why should the moon shrink holler for seasons smaller?
Why must Bluebells turn white on someone's insistence?

Can cranes compel crows to stand still straight stiff-necked?
Can cobras wish rhinos to crawl and get frogs served?
Can deer desire lions to have their skin soft spot-flecked?
Can creepers caution palm trees to keep their logs curved?

Nature had her reason when she crafted me: ME,
As black-hole or blue-hole has many a meaning; 
A hole named ME might be, otherwise, stay empty,
There's none, on earth, like me with the same leaning...

Creepers, climbers, flowers, or flies I cannot be;
What creature on earth could fully resemble ME?



14 September 2021
Why am I me? Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Shreya LN

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Date: 9/23/2021 3:50:00 PM
I remember this one. It's so cool. BIG congrats on the win!
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Date: 9/23/2021 8:21:00 AM
Congratulations on this honor mention Alex, you crafted a wonderful poem. Thanks for your visit on my page
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Date: 9/22/2021 10:41:00 PM
I love how you've spoken about nature, and you as a part of nature. It was a thought provoking poem. Congratulations on your placement!
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 9/23/2021 7:11:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 9/14/2021 7:34:00 PM
Such original, creative ideas, Christuraj! I am very impressed! The form, Sonnet, which you have chosen, sounds perfect for such a unique poem. Kudos for great ideas you came up with, to match with an interesting theme! Love and best wishes ~ Mala
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 9/14/2021 11:21:00 PM
Thank you very muich.
Date: 9/14/2021 1:56:00 PM
very interesting and original poetry! I enjoyed the imagery.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 9/14/2021 4:29:00 PM
Thank you very much.
Date: 9/14/2021 11:52:00 AM
So true Chirsturaj, best wishes in the Contest
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 9/14/2021 4:29:00 PM
Thank you very much.
Date: 9/14/2021 11:24:00 AM
Thank you for you comment,your Sonnet poem is wonderful!!
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 9/14/2021 4:28:00 PM
Thank you very much.
Date: 9/14/2021 11:20:00 AM
None can resemble you Chris for your uniqueness is what makes you you, gl in the contest . :)
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 9/14/2021 4:28:00 PM
Thank you very much.
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