Why Am I Me

Why should the sun, like primrose, change its true color?
Why shouldn't each color have its own existence?
Why should the moon shrink holler for seasons smaller?
Why must Bluebells turn white on someone's insistence?

Can cranes compel crows to stand still straight stiff-necked?
Can cobras wish rhinos to crawl and get frogs served?
Can deer desire lions to have their skin soft spot-flecked?
Can creepers caution palm trees to keep their logs curved?

Nature had her reason when she crafted me: ME,
As black-hole or blue-hole has many a meaning; 
A hole named ME might be, otherwise, stay empty,
There's none, on earth, like me with the same leaning...

Creepers, climbers, flowers, or flies I cannot be;
What creature on earth could fully resemble ME?



14 September 2021
Why am I me? Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Shreya LN
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Dietrich Avatar
September 23, 2021 at 3:50 PM
I remember this one. It's so cool. BIG congrats on the win!
Poet Avatar
September 23, 2021 at 8:21 AM
Congratulations on this honor mention Alex, you crafted a wonderful poem. Thanks for your visit on my page
Ln Avatar
September 22, 2021 at 10:41 PM
I love how you've spoken about nature, and you as a part of nature. It was a thought provoking poem. Congratulations on your placement!
Alex Avatar
September 23, 2021 at 7:11 AM
Thank you very much.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
September 14, 2021 at 7:34 PM
Such original, creative ideas, Christuraj! I am very impressed! The form, Sonnet, which you have chosen, sounds perfect for such a unique poem. Kudos for great ideas you came up with, to match with an interesting theme! Love and best wishes ~ Mala
Alex Avatar
September 14, 2021 at 11:21 PM
Thank you very muich.
Dietrich Avatar
September 14, 2021 at 1:56 PM
very interesting and original poetry! I enjoyed the imagery.
Alex Avatar
September 14, 2021 at 4:29 PM
Thank you very much.
May Avatar
September 14, 2021 at 11:52 AM
So true Chirsturaj, best wishes in the Contest
Alex Avatar
September 14, 2021 at 4:29 PM
Thank you very much.
Magdalinos Avatar
September 14, 2021 at 11:24 AM
Thank you for you comment,your Sonnet poem is wonderful!!
Alex Avatar
September 14, 2021 at 4:28 PM
Thank you very much.
Rose  Avatar
September 14, 2021 at 11:20 AM
None can resemble you Chris for your uniqueness is what makes you you, gl in the contest . :)
Alex Avatar
September 14, 2021 at 4:28 PM
Thank you very much.
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