Why
When you started rating my poems low
I couldn’t put my finger on it
But I knew something was happening to
Make them drop and weirdly enough only
When you started commenting and acting like
A best friend to me so I
Set a trap and now I know
When you started rating my poems low.
Written by Brenda Meier-Hans
10.20.2014
Rick Paris’s Contest:
8 Lines 7 Words Enjambment
Copyright © Brenda Meier-Hans | Year Posted 2014
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