Why

When you started rating my poems low
I couldn’t put my finger on it
But I knew something was happening to
Make them drop and weirdly enough only 
When you started commenting and acting like 
A best friend to me so I 
Set a trap and now I know
When you started rating my poems low.

Written by Brenda Meier-Hans 
10.20.2014
Rick Paris’s Contest:
8 Lines 7 Words Enjambment
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Yvonne Avatar
October 24, 2014 at 10:06 PM
False picture false name so who knows who it really was. Love this Enjambent though. Funny how anger can pull great art out of us.
Meier-Hans Avatar
October 25, 2014 at 9:19 AM
But it's not funny to get angry. Emotions really do bring out the best and worst in us.
Hamilton Avatar
October 23, 2014 at 7:16 PM
so sorry to hear this Brenda your poetry I have always found good and most excellent, ignore it not worth wasting your time on. As long as you are happy with it nothing else matters big hugs
Meier-Hans Avatar
October 23, 2014 at 8:39 PM
Thanks Shadow, you and many others here have given great advise. I've been quite happy here so in the future I'll just keep doing my thing.
Andresen Avatar
October 23, 2014 at 2:01 PM
- A great write, dear Brenda - Write with your heart and soul ..... I love your poems! - Good luck in the contest! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Meier-Hans Avatar
October 23, 2014 at 8:36 PM
Thanks for your kind words Anne Lise
Roper Avatar
October 23, 2014 at 8:20 AM
Yeah Brenda, you know I' new so I just kind of stay behind the curtain and peek but I like what everyone is writing espically Cherl and Maurice. Love and hugs eve, good luck on the contest
Dunn Avatar
October 22, 2014 at 5:18 PM
Briend who is doing this to you, I'd like to kick them if I could right between their verses most intimate lines if you catch my drift. Some on this sight seem to think they can be so mean sometimes. But I hope you know I have only given you what you deserve, and I've only read great stuff from you my friend never lower than a six, but for this I'd give you a 7 and the fool who put you so low can simply shove it. cheri
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October 22, 2014 at 4:06 PM
It has happened to me as well but I have not been able to figure out who didn't like my poems because all the comments were so positive. I have to admit it left me confused. For me I only rate poems if it is to give a 7. So I give you a 7 for this one Brenda.
Meier-Hans Avatar
October 23, 2014 at 8:36 PM
Well I won't mention a name here Cheri but if it happens again I'll just block them.
Meier-Hans Avatar
October 23, 2014 at 7:48 AM
Thanks Richard. It is sweet of you.
Callus Avatar
October 22, 2014 at 10:17 AM
Dear Brenda, why would anybody want to do something like this? It is so very low! At least you managed to find out who it was! Some strange things do happen on Soup, but I suppose there are explanations behind them. Take care:) // paul
Meier-Hans Avatar
October 22, 2014 at 4:05 PM
Thanks Paul, nice to hear your comment
Guzzi Avatar
October 21, 2014 at 7:24 PM
hmmm :0 L & L
Guzzi Avatar
October 21, 2014 at 7:23 PM
Good-ness Brenda, that's so devious! BIG HUGS & a 7 ;) Light & Love
Meier-Hans Avatar
October 21, 2014 at 9:26 PM
Thanks Debbie.
Dietrich Avatar
October 21, 2014 at 6:45 PM
It seems very weird to me that they were doing that, and I know someone is doing it to me too, dearie. It would be nice to know their real intentions!! I don't even use those ratings and I don't really understand what purpose they serve!! I guess some people just get off on rating poems!!! I think you did a good job with enjambment here!
Meier-Hans Avatar
October 21, 2014 at 9:25 PM
Very odd. It seems like there are different people here who get off on being mean.
Petersen Potter Avatar
October 21, 2014 at 4:32 PM
I am sad but no too surprised of this misbehavior, Brenda. That's a very childish thing to do to you or anyone around. I can't blame you a bit for being upset at all, but believe me if I were you I'd shake it all off and quick. To me that so called "friend" wasnt truly a true friend of yours I guess.just remember, that even Jesus was betrayed by his own people. Brenda,you're a very nice poet! Well, you are to me! And I agree with our good and sweet friend Tim. Listen to him! Lol.. Really! :) take care now! Sending you lots of hugs! Love and blessings! Xxx D.
Meier-Hans Avatar
October 21, 2014 at 5:04 PM
Thanks for your kind comment Dorian. I get over things quick and have already moved on and will continue to do so. I just wanted them to know I caught them.
Devonshire Avatar
October 21, 2014 at 3:16 PM
Oooh! Such a betrayal of friendship. I have a friend who does this, but she is honestly expressing her view. It took a while to understand this, but I know that if she likes something, she will not give it a low rating. We are very good friends now. I hope whoever has been doing this to you is not just out to hurt you. Hold them accountable and block them if they are. So sad this is happening to you. You're one of my favorite "people" as well as a favorite poet. Love, Carolyn
Meier-Hans Avatar
October 21, 2014 at 4:57 PM
Something else. Several people here have commented what I did wrong and helped me correct it, I am very thankful to them. Constructive criticism I welcome just don't play games.
Meier-Hans Avatar
October 21, 2014 at 4:48 PM
Meier-Hans Avatar
October 21, 2014 at 4:47 PM
Thank you so much for your sweet comment Carolyn. I am honoured to have you as a friend.
Smith Avatar
October 21, 2014 at 1:53 PM
Oh Brenda..Your poetry is so beautiful...don't worry about trivial numbers....You are one poet I always go out of my way to find and rate higher than any number system...love and hugs Tim
Meier-Hans Avatar
October 21, 2014 at 2:12 PM
Thanks so much Tim. You are very sweet and I know they don't mean anything, it's just I don't understand how people can be so mean and they shouldn't act like a good friend if they want to stab me. I know how blessed I am to have others who are so wonderful here. I just wanted to post this so they know I am onto their game.
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October 21, 2014 at 1:45 PM
Have a look at my latest poems, dear Brenda, I have raised the issue of certain people, playing games with the good intentions of others. I do not agree they are doing it because they are childish but because a few of them are malicious and the best thing to do is to let good people alone! ES TUT MIR LEID, meine freudin Brenda!
Meier-Hans Avatar
October 21, 2014 at 2:07 PM
Thanks so much Demetrius. You are so kind and I will look.
Sietesantos Avatar
October 21, 2014 at 12:28 PM
I thought I was the only victim! Thank you for exposing this mean-spirited behavior in such an excellent piece! Great write! Pandita
Allison Avatar
October 21, 2014 at 12:36 PM
Its only happened to me recently Pandita but it is so so childish :-( Hugs jan xxx
Meier-Hans Avatar
October 21, 2014 at 12:32 PM
My darn auto correct, Pandita
Meier-Hans Avatar
October 21, 2014 at 12:31 PM
I am sure there has been a lot of victims Pundits. Pitiful!
Allison Avatar
October 21, 2014 at 12:09 PM
Oh Brenda I can relate to this write as recently it's happening to me too - great write my friend! Good luck in the contest - its a 7 from me!!! t:-) hugs Jan xxx
Meier-Hans Avatar
October 21, 2014 at 12:29 PM
If you figure it out let me know and I will see if it's the same one. XOXO
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