Why

Why, my thoughts over whelm
Why, I'm still drowning in solitude
Why, I have the constant frown
Why, I'm always in such a mood
Why, I am now always whining 
Why, I can't stand tall , be counted
Why, my cloud has no silver lining
Why, I feel so lost, bitter, frustrated                                
Why, I'm still on this rollercoaster ride
Why, I can't seem to find that break 
Why, it's so long sense I've cried 
Why, so much pain and heartache
Why, I feel so confused and angry
Why, I'm still searching for meaning
Why, I feel so vonrabal and so lonely
Why, I can never shake this feeling

People may not remember I wrote a big epic 16 verse called outside looking in well over last few months
that write that I scaped alot of recent poems Ive wrote come from that including this as I felt so many diffent elements in that at time
this again like a follow on from If I  I wonder patterns   WRITTEN BY MY SELF DAVIDSCOTT FEB/ MARC  2013

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 3/21/2013 10:25:00 PM
why why why??? love this poem.. well expressed... a good developing poem, and never ending question... always~ Linda
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