Why

Why can't I breathe whenever I think about you
Why can't I speak whenever I talk about you
Is it your smile
Or
Is it your eyes
Or is it your love
It can't be your smile
Because it disarms me
It can't be your eyes
Because they sparkle in the light
So it must be your love
Your love makes me happy
Why does it make me happy
Because your love for me 
Makes my love for you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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May 10, 2011 at 11:51 AM
Quite a creative write. Heartfelt.
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September 13, 2010 at 6:05 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Frances. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you may enter.If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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September 10, 2010 at 10:34 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight.. soup offers many contests on site.. check them out and enter ..and good luck with luv..
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