Why

Why can't I breathe whenever I think about you Why can't I speak whenever I talk about you Is it your smile Or Is it your eyes Or is it your love It can't be your smile Because it disarms me It can't be your eyes Because they sparkle in the light So it must be your love Your love makes me happy Why does it make me happy Because your love for me Makes my love for you

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Zzzzz Zzzzz

Date: 5/10/2011 11:51:00 AM

Quite a creative write. Heartfelt.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/13/2010 6:05:00 AM

I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Frances. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you may enter.If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/10/2010 10:34:00 PM

Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight.. soup offers many contests on site.. check them out and enter ..and good luck with luv..