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who's where when what's why

i've not one clue
whats happened
to you and can't
do a thing about
it so don't come
to me expecting
to see your way
clear and outa it


len

absencewordsfree verse

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Joe Maverick

March 18, 2025 at 10:49 AM

I'll raise a glass to that Len.' Once you look at things though them its all acedemic anyway.'

Sand Blown

March 29, 2025 at 2:38 PM

sometimes its all a flip of a coin.....len

Andrea Dietrich

March 14, 2025 at 4:00 PM

Ha. Seeing Victors response below. Fun little poem

Sand Blown

March 15, 2025 at 12:20 PM

yup.....we all dig our way out.....or....not... : ) len

Daniel Henry Rodgers

March 11, 2025 at 4:41 PM

Dear Len, Okay this one hits like a sudden gust which is sharp, direct, and full of unspoken weight. That feeling of helplessness, of being caught in the storm without a map, is so starkly real. Your words carry more than they say, and that’s the magic. Brilliant. Spring Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Sand Blown

March 12, 2025 at 9:25 AM

somethings just won't shake off at times.......so i look at the world the way a dragon fly might, or some other kind of animal life.....the older we get the more 'why sir?' becomes frequent and, 'well', i answer, 'ah....hmmmm....nice day'...........len