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Who's Untouchable Now

For days you let me drown beneath a harsh torrential rain Until "I'll give you once last chance, don't mess it up again" These words ignite an extinct flame, it only took this spark To make me turn and wonder who the hell you think you are. A little laugh escapes me, this fuels exasperation For you must think I'm still the girl so weak with desperation I had to let you break me, believed callousness was truth Why did I want this cruelty? Why did I even want you? The storms you forecast for me, brewed to cause me strife Seeped inside my deathlyness, brought me back to life It forced me to remember just exactly who I am I found myself again the day you turned your back and ran. I swear you will regret this, my one and final 'chance' I'll show you what it takes to be a playa with big plans I promise you I won't mess up, of that I have no doubt I'll make damn sure you want me back.... .....but guess who's untouchable now?

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Date: 2/5/2018 1:48:00 PM
Yeah I feel it, confidence exuding from betrayal, very unusual but intriguing write Jodie, I am enjoying your writing, keep em comin.
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