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Who's In Charge---Grook

WHO'S IN CHARGE?


Backseat drama
has crossed the line?
Do not cave!
YOU are THE mama!
They don't behave?
Just one more whine
you must be resigned
to drive them home, to bed/pajamas!
Then, enjoy some time to have the wine
you crave!




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Contest Sponsored by Silent One "Grook"
3/5/13

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Andrea Dietrich

February 18, 2016 at 8:00 PM

Said like a true Mama!! mama mia!! Congrats, Carrie.

Susan Gentry

February 17, 2016 at 9:03 PM

Congratulations on your win! I've wonder this myself sometimes :) Excellent!

Poet Destroyer A

February 17, 2016 at 9:53 AM

Carrie, Congrats on your Grook win. XOX ~LINDA~

Timothy Hicks

February 16, 2016 at 9:58 PM

This grook has a lot of personality too it, and was something different. Your whine/win play on words, I thought, was original. Thanks for your participation!

Carrie Richards

February 17, 2016 at 9:46 AM

Thanks so much Tim. This was a fun challenge and contest !!! :)

Donna Jones

April 13, 2013 at 6:47 AM

Oh yeah!!! Congratulations Carrie...Donna

Poet Destroyer A

April 11, 2013 at 10:48 AM

I like your grook Carrie, sounds like my 2 young ones.. a nice little win...PD

Sara Kendrick

April 8, 2013 at 2:20 PM

Congrats on your great win..Sara

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

April 8, 2013 at 8:22 AM

Congratulations on your winning place Carrie, nice going xx

Sara Kendrick

March 8, 2013 at 12:28 PM

I have been there with the backseat issues..It is no fun..Great way to express the idea..Reads like winning material to me..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

March 7, 2013 at 2:49 PM

Good one, Carrie. Love your play on words. My husband likes to say (when someone is whining) "Would you like a little cheese with that w(h)ine?"

Tim Ryerson

March 6, 2013 at 4:08 PM

You ARE THE MAMA for sure!...And have a glass of wine then another and another, etc.... Also, thanks so much for your comments on my Cottage poem, dear friend...Coming from you it means the world..I know what your dear daughter must be going through, and you as well watching her go through it...I don't know how much help I could be, but if there's anything she needs, I am here for her...God bless you both - Tim