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Who's Gonna Fly To Get Your Star?

Who's gonna fly to get your star? In this race This race of glorius vanity! They call it a journey. A plea of insanity. So, where are your packs? Where are your dreams to slam you in front? You think you chose the paths But it's their truth you can't confront. Who's gonna drown to get your treasure? In this agony This agony of forbidden temptation. You call it a change But in the end it's just frustration. So, where are your hopes? Where is your faith to raise your soul? A hoe is burying your earthen lies creating only a bigger hole.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/7/2010 3:26:00 PM
Thank you..
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Date: 10/7/2010 1:11:00 PM
This piece I like a lot ,appearing going in a downward spiral but most thoughtful and uplifting !
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