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Some birdies really... Can be so unkind All day pecking Only gripes and whines It's not hot enough So she ups and flies Down to Miami beach via South Carolina skies She probably thinks... Oh Lord I’m a Dodo bird Maybe it's a secret lover, tell me, have you heard Whoever it is...don't say I don't bother mind Blue Jay’s staying over and it’s tweeting time

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 11/12/2018 9:30:00 PM
Sweet . . . : )
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Date: 7/9/2018 4:38:00 PM
:)
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Date: 4/29/2018 6:01:00 PM
Your poem gave me a chuckle, Arturo, especially when you mentioned the dodo bird. How easily the subject of your verse was able to replace the bird that flew south. Love this one! Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 4/29/2018 3:49:00 AM
Not such a dodo in finding a replacement I see Arturo.
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Jean Murray
Date: 4/29/2018 11:10:00 AM
LOL
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Arturo Michael
Date: 4/29/2018 9:39:00 AM
Imagine wearing shoes that are too tight fitting...it's gonna hurt...replace it...
Date: 4/26/2018 6:58:00 AM
Your poem made me smile, Arturo.
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Arturo Michael
Date: 4/26/2018 8:09:00 AM
I can imagine, a beautiful sweet smile...Stay good Agnes...All the best...
Date: 4/26/2018 6:20:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your poem..it feels like a smile..a walk on the beach..tweeting time..well done Arturo!
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Arturo Michael
Date: 4/26/2018 6:49:00 AM
Hi Vijay...it is one... despite the tricks...all situations can be remedied....
Date: 4/26/2018 2:51:00 AM
- A great poem and picture, Arturo - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Arturo Michael
Date: 4/26/2018 5:10:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise
Date: 4/25/2018 11:44:00 PM
I would love to be on that beach!!! hahaha
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Arturo Michael
Date: 4/26/2018 5:10:00 AM
Good morning Aurore...Nice to see you...Thanks for passing by my friend...

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