Who's Fooling Who

Some birdies really...

Can be so unkind

All day pecking 

Only gripes and whines

It's not hot enough 

So she ups and flies

Down to Miami beach via South Carolina skies

She probably thinks... Oh Lord 

I’m a Dodo bird 

Maybe it's a secret lover, tell me, have you heard

Whoever it is...don't say 

I don't bother mind 

Blue Jay’s staying over and it’s tweeting time
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Shaw Avatar
November 12, 2018 at 9:30 PM
Sweet . . . : )
Acrich Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 4:38 PM
:)
Devonshire Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 6:01 PM
Your poem gave me a chuckle, Arturo, especially when you mentioned the dodo bird. How easily the subject of your verse was able to replace the bird that flew south. Love this one! Hugs, Carolyn
Murray Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 3:49 AM
Not such a dodo in finding a replacement I see Arturo.
Murray Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 11:10 AM
LOL
Michael Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 9:39 AM
Imagine wearing shoes that are too tight fitting...it's gonna hurt...replace it...
Krampe Avatar
April 26, 2018 at 6:58 AM
Your poem made me smile, Arturo.
Michael Avatar
April 26, 2018 at 8:09 AM
I can imagine, a beautiful sweet smile...Stay good Agnes...All the best...
Pandit Avatar
April 26, 2018 at 6:20 AM
Enjoyed reading your poem..it feels like a smile..a walk on the beach..tweeting time..well done Arturo!
Michael Avatar
April 26, 2018 at 6:49 AM
Hi Vijay...it is one... despite the tricks...all situations can be remedied....
Andresen Avatar
April 26, 2018 at 2:51 AM
- A great poem and picture, Arturo - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Michael Avatar
April 26, 2018 at 5:10 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise
Severo Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 11:44 PM
I would love to be on that beach!!! hahaha
Michael Avatar
April 26, 2018 at 5:10 AM
Good morning Aurore...Nice to see you...Thanks for passing by my friend...
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