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Whoop Whoop For Love

Whoop whoop I'm in love with love It's the only thing that really matters Everything else goes on totally unabated And can leave our mind in tatters But uttering the word love to people Most times they'll melt and blubber They get flustered and turn a crimson red Flounder like a ship with no rudder It's a basic instinct with all living things We think that we're superior It's the common bond that unites us all There's no real motive ulterior The propagation of the whole human race Is the basic reason for love But it's evolved in us *****sapiens To an act that is honoured above © Jack Ellison 2013

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Date: 12/7/2013 5:33:00 PM
Hey Jack another great work! You gotta "Love" this one!!!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 12/7/2013 5:58:00 PM
Thank you my very good friend... your kind words are very much appreciated! Cheers!
Date: 12/7/2013 1:04:00 PM
Whoopety-whoop-whoop to love!! You have so much love to give I doubt you'll ever run out. Herewith a big hamper of love in return, my friend. Hugs and kisses. Licia XOXOXOXOX
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Jack Ellison
Date: 12/7/2013 1:34:00 PM
With that hamper of love you just sent me, plus what I had in reserve, I just overflowed! Ewww Whatta mess! Going to have pass it out indiscriminately... a great big bunch heading back to you my dear Licia!!! XOXOX!
Date: 12/7/2013 11:07:00 AM
Love love love this one! Hugs always sweet Jack XOXOX
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Jack Ellison
Date: 12/7/2013 11:17:00 AM
Kinda knew you, my dear Sarai, would like this one!!! You ARE love... love ya ta bits! XOXOXOX
Date: 12/7/2013 9:01:00 AM
If love is the only thing that matters... Then you haven't been around Dragon for very long... If you want to snap out of it... I suggest a hot foot or two... LOL... Or having to face up to an angry mob... When Dragon has escaped his handlers... Or had to try to teach Dragon the difference between right and wrong... when he doesn't want to listen... He's kinda like a bunch of teenagers... all wrapped up in one... and we ALL know what that does to one's love life... You get the point...
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Carol Eastman
Date: 12/7/2013 9:03:00 AM
Oh... PS... Never say WINNING around a Dragon... They hate to lose... It'll give them a case of grump-itis for the rest of the day.

Book: Shattered Sighs