Whom You Wombed

a mother births,
 but she is a mother long before the labor
 a promise to care for,
 to love and to hold,
 for better or for worse.

 a mother protects.
 a mother heals.
 built-in powers granted by the gods.
  a mother is a promise,
 signed, sealed, and forged at conception.

 The haunting question is..
 how do you betray the one you love?
 whom you wombed,
 you promised to be here
 yet I am motherless,
 without love or comfort.

 you promised me life,
 yet granted me every way to die.
 you promised me warmth,
 but gave me a heart so cold.
 our tie is astray,
 our souls linked, yet welded with ice.

 how I long for the promise you kept.
 how I long to be your little girl again.
 promise makers are forgivers too.
 I will keep my vow to honor you.
 I will forgive your deranged words,
 only if you can uphold your bargain:
 to be my giver.
 to be my mother.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Velasco Avatar
July 15, 2026 at 10:34 PM
A deeply moving poem about love, loss, and the painful hope for forgiveness. Beautifully expressed.
Treadway Avatar
September 2, 2026 at 11:06 AM
Thank you so much!
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July 7, 2026 at 1:31 PM
I am sorry for what you had to go through, no child should have to go through this and not have the love of a mother... some mothers can be so deluded... Enjoyed your take on the contest... Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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September 2, 2026 at 11:06 AM
Thankyou so much for your empathy and ability to understand the depth of this poem; I greatly appreciate the first place judging!
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