Whole 'Nother Worlds

Balassi stanza

In other worlds out there, 
kids hide and say a prayer.
Mom needs the mornings to snooze.
This child gets up alone, 
her hunger to postpone;
Dad's only care is his booze.
She must get to the bus 
without making a fuss;
there's no sense gettin' a bruise.


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Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
October 24, 2011 at 8:07 AM
Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram's "Balassi Stanza" contest Reason. Love, Carol
Jones Avatar
October 23, 2011 at 5:07 PM
Just this week I listened to an hour long radio program of interviews of kids in Alateen. The situation is widespread and sad, and the resourcefulness and spirits of the kids are more than amazing. Prevalent problem, thanks, Reason, for the well writ Balassi on the topic, and congrats. Namaste~N
Sweetheart Avatar
October 23, 2011 at 8:48 AM
Congrats Reason on a top ten victory with this exceptional entry luv...enjoy....
Freeman Avatar
October 23, 2011 at 5:32 AM
beautiful work Reason. Congrats on a worthy poem present. Agape, Moses
Mehta Avatar
October 23, 2011 at 3:48 AM
Congratulations on the win in my contest, Reason
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