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Where the river runs cold, warmth can still be found In the tranquility of the flow, is a peaceful gurgling sound Snow and ice do not stop its move, as it crests in smiles Cold air transforms the landscape, winter’s white is seen for miles Invigorating, refreshing, sights pleasing to senses, across the land An awakening occurs, I’m mesmerized by snow covered sand On the embankment in stillness, I watch the dark water dance Knowing around each bend, there will be another chance Where snow-capped rocks peek out to see from the shore I am an observer watching, I am whoever I want to be…and more Heidi Sands 12/18/22

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Date: 12/18/2022 2:52:00 PM
Awesome descriptions, Heidi. Your poem as beautiful as the photo-- adorning the winter scene, surrounded by nature's beauty.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/18/2022 3:32:00 PM
Thank you so much, my friend. Nice scenes today and snow covered mountains gorgeous too :)
Date: 12/18/2022 1:51:00 PM
Youve been out walking Heidi, and well inspired, you cant beat being out and about amongst nature. Tom
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Date: 12/18/2022 2:00:00 PM
Yes. There were some beautiful sights today with the snow covered mountains and the sky too. I love it. Thank you Tom. I appreciate your kind comments :)

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