Who'D Satiate Her

An insatiable fire burned deep Holding a form and face so fair desire audaciously would seep Captivating all men who dared Gazing with hot savage blood beheld her with fear and lust their desires would then flood This only added to her mistrust who'd satiate her burning desire This man a claimed conqueror Could he truly handle her deep fire would she remain his subjugator She gazed with a burning curiosity A dagger tightly held in her hand He'd gotten this far with his tenacity Could a conqueror finally withstand
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Fleming Avatar
July 29, 2019 at 3:59 AM
Ah ha! So, at last...the Warrior Princess -- she returns! Looking forward to part two, Brenda. Fondest thoughts. :) john P.s I like this blend of outward feistiness and an inner, hidden femininity...very sensuous. :)
Chiri Avatar
July 30, 2019 at 1:15 AM
Thank you John! I think your my biggest support!;)
Theraven Avatar
July 28, 2019 at 9:34 PM
Brenda, I like this poem. Will desire's sweet web be fulfilled, to leave him a willing martyr? I would like to know the rest, is it too much to hope for a two-parter? -Richard
Chiri Avatar
July 28, 2019 at 10:27 PM
Yes lol more than likely there will be s part two! Right now it's just left up in the air! I am working on it as we speak! Thank you!;)
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