Who Will Come?

who will come when you are sad who will come when you are mad? Who will come when you 
are glad?Noone will come ...you must find within yourself yourself the true meaning of your 
feelings.Noone else can change the way you feel you must change it . look beyond and see 
the golden light .you will soon see that you need not be afraid.when you find the light keep it 
a glow.when you find the dark let it go. fireflies will be fireflies and nightbirds will be 
nightbirds. As clever as a mouse and as sneaky as a hen with her eggs don't hide your 
feelings let them out.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Guzzi Avatar
March 26, 2011 at 4:58 PM
interesting write I think it would be stronger with the lines separated instead of papragraph shape? Light & Love
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February 25, 2010 at 6:32 AM
What a wonderful way to spend this snowy day reading poetry. I am so happy that yours was amongst the ones I am reading today. Thank you for sharing your poetry today Carey. Love, Carol
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February 24, 2010 at 11:14 AM
You have a pretty awesome style. I like this. Good advice. I had issues with my feelings for awhile, but im doing much better now.
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