Larry Bradfield Poet Rhyme

Who We Were

Memories of who we were haunt my soul             A
Was it so long ago or yesterday                      B
That I so needed you to make me whole             A
Can you recall the reason we parted                 C
It was youth that killed what we had started        C
So many lonely years along the way                    B
Your sweet love is what I should have guarded       C
Instead I let foolish pride take its toll         A

10/24/2016

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Alexis Y. November 9, 2016 at 7:01 AM Hi Larry, Congratulations on your fine win:') Alexis

Beautiful Scars November 8, 2016 at 1:55 PM lovely poem Larry :) thank you for being a part of my contest and congratulations on your placement :) -luloo Larry Bradfield November 8, 2016 at 8:41 PM Thank you, Laura Loo! I enjoyed the contest...clever arrangement that yielded some interesting rhyme patterns!..Larry