Who Is Your Neighbor

September sun beats a downtown hotel,
For skid row children the heat is hell.

Mother drugged and father out to score,
Their children play alone, on the lobby floor.

They play with no one watching them,
Growing up without roots or stem.

Outsiders of the swollen hotel lobby,
Don't show up, its just not their hobby.

Their crimes will soon pay the price,
Parent's example leads only to vice.

9/9/2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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September 15, 2015 at 6:39 PM
Congrats on your win Julie! A sad but wonderful write.
Merryman Avatar
September 14, 2015 at 10:10 PM
Julie, this is so sad, but you have described it well in your poem. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
A  Avatar
September 14, 2015 at 1:25 PM
Julie, Congrats on your, Who Is Your Neighbor win! SKAT
Heckman Avatar
September 14, 2015 at 2:09 PM
Oh thank you Skat...
Allison Avatar
September 14, 2015 at 7:52 AM
such a sad state of affairs Julie congrats on your win:-( hugs jan x
Heckman Avatar
September 14, 2015 at 8:08 AM
it is very sad you're right Jan and almost invisible...
Woods    Avatar
September 9, 2015 at 12:24 PM
How often do we see this in society, its a tragedy. Very nice write
Heckman Avatar
September 9, 2015 at 1:32 PM
thank you Mark
Black Blacharczyk Avatar
September 9, 2015 at 11:13 AM
I was in a ghetto in Newark NJ in the early 80's and my heart broke for the many children exactly under the conditions you write. Your imagery is clear and hard to imagine.
Heckman Avatar
September 9, 2015 at 1:33 PM
Thanks Frank, the poverty is every where
Godwin Avatar
September 9, 2015 at 11:02 AM
I like your poem very much ... CayCay
Heckman Avatar
September 9, 2015 at 1:33 PM
thank you CayCay
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