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7/8/2025 for Lubricant Poetry Contest sponsored by Kai Michael Neumann 

All dressed up for the Spring parade, he hankered for an escapade.  Can he do it? Don't think he can't! He thought to bring a lubricant. He won't suffer a bumpy ride.  Lubricant allows him to slide. Who is this guy who leaves a trail? Of course, my friend, he is the snail.

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Date: 7/12/2025 6:12:00 AM
Lol. This poem is my smile for today .
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Date: 7/10/2025 3:41:00 PM
You had us guessing!
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David Crandall
Date: 7/10/2025 4:09:00 PM
haha - that's good!
Date: 7/10/2025 10:00:00 AM
- He is born slippery and doesn't need any lubricant... (of course it's a man :))) - hugs
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David Crandall
Date: 7/10/2025 4:09:00 PM
haha, I like that - born slippery - :-))
Date: 7/9/2025 5:50:00 AM
Are we sure it's not a she? Did you check?
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David Crandall
Date: 7/9/2025 8:39:00 AM
Come to think of it, you could be right - this poem might work better with a female protagonist - lol.

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