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Who Is Knocking At My Door

It’s Christmas Eve; there’s someone at my door!
But with the horrid sound outside my window,
I wonder who is knocking and what for!
Midst violent wind I see a surreal snow!

Within it’s haze, there is a grotesque sight -
gigantic and so out of place, I quiver!
A snowman leers at me, and frigid fright
goes through my bloodstream like an icy river.

Again, the knock! Whoever could it be?
This morning I wished Christmas would be gone!
A premonition now is telling me
that nothing good is out there on my lawn.

My friend had warned me that I really ought
not curse this season. Oh, what have I done?
More pounding at the door, but I cannot
go near that door; there’s nowhere I can run.

I look out at the snowman. He is more
enormous than a tree, and now I hear
a sound like laughing elves outside the door.
I stand as thought I’m paralyzed by fear.

That movie! There’s a movie I heard of.
A boy hates Christmas, wishing it away.
A storm brews suddenly in skies above,
heralding a deadly Christmas day.

A Shadow Santa comes. This wicked soul
is known as Krampus, and he brings with him
an evil that can swallow people whole.
If I have summoned him, my fate is grim.

The storm keeps wailing; now there’s a new sound
of scratching on my roof, but there is no 
more knocking. Oh, who’s walking all around
my roof? I run out to the blinding snow!

At first I can see nothing till my eyes
are drawn to where a great big bag was put
beside my door.  What’s this? More Santa lies?
Though filled with dread, I push it with my foot.

There jumps out from the bag the strangest thing -
A tiny man; he’s made of gingerbread!
He laughs maliciously, and starts to sing,
“Before the night is over, you’ll be dead.”

Out on my lawn, I see beneath the snow
there’s something creeping fast and right toward me!
What creature slithers underneath the snow?
I can’t escape, so back inside I go!

I shut the door and bolt it, then collapse
Upon my sofa near the fireplace, when
I hear an eerie sound above. It taps,
taps, taps.  It’s something on the roof again!

Past Christmases with family go through
my frantic mind; I cower there and wait.
It’s Krampus, and he’s up there in the flue,
and soon to be delivering my fate!


Written Dec. 24, 2015/ Inspired by the contest of TAMMY REAMS
and the current Christmas horror movie Krampus.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Pandhare Avatar
January 19, 2016 at 6:47 AM
you depicted scary description before my eyes and i like your creativity . great work
A   Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 11:58 PM
ANDREA, Congrats on your win. ~LINDA~
A  Avatar
January 4, 2016 at 10:02 AM
ANDREA, Congrats on your "Who is Knocking at my Door? WIN... Luv **SKAT**
May Avatar
January 3, 2016 at 9:23 AM
Congrats on your win Andrea
Carmack Avatar
January 3, 2016 at 6:39 AM
Congrats on your win.
Cheema Avatar
January 3, 2016 at 6:10 AM
Andrea freaking out was surely interesting! Congrats on your placement!
Horne Avatar
January 2, 2016 at 3:03 PM
love this scary write
Walker Avatar
January 1, 2016 at 10:50 AM
This would make a great movie. You created such a descriptive frightening poem.
Canerdy Avatar
December 29, 2015 at 5:13 PM
WOW! This is great--a skillfully-written, suspenseful narrative poem. Janice
Austin Avatar
December 27, 2015 at 12:00 PM
Quoth the Christmas raven, "Nevermore," eh. This Krampus is a scary dude or ghoul or whatever. Love it, but I take it you didn't write this one for kids. Love, daver
Inman Avatar
December 26, 2015 at 8:17 PM
Andrea, Krampus and I are old friends. He told me he just wanted to say hi, but you wouldn't open your door. Hope you had a great Christmas wonderful Lady.
May Avatar
December 26, 2015 at 5:38 PM
Great write Andrea...with all the chills of a halloween tale.... hugs
Hamza Avatar
December 25, 2015 at 8:17 PM
enjoyed reading though it is scary,excellent imagery and rhyming,wish i had seen the film
Rose Avatar
December 25, 2015 at 7:47 PM
Great write
Allison Avatar
December 25, 2015 at 2:26 PM
Such scary imagery Andrea I feel quite chilled reading this - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Allison Avatar
December 25, 2015 at 3:03 PM
I think I'm glad I haven't I don't do scary except when I look in the mirror lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
December 25, 2015 at 3:00 PM
You should see the movie!!!
Aniagyei Avatar
December 25, 2015 at 2:51 AM
Beautiful!!! Andrea..... Nice perspective too.... Loved the flow
Vaso Avatar
December 25, 2015 at 1:01 AM
I feel kinda guilty now knocking on your door! Hugs and Merry Christmas!
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