Who Is Knocking At My Door

 The Puzzle

Who is knocking on my door?
How much longer to ignore?
How much longer to pretend?
No more power to defend.
I am hiding in my room.
No more courage to assume.
No more courage when you are old.
No more summer, only cold.
Who is knocking on my door?
Silence speaks, words ignore.
Living, frightened, not knowing why?
Certain, not sure, living or die.
Hiding in the darkness, not seeing light;
better for a blind living at night. 
Where is my courage? Gone with age!
Over and over, flew from the cage.
As often as I have done before,
not knowing who is knocking the door?
Why, like a child, I crawl and hide;
under the shadows, saving my pride.
Who is the one knocking again?
Causing my world to shatter with pain.
To open the door, not knowing who;
Nothing is clear; what can I do?
Turning the knob, fearful with daze,
cannot find a way out of this maze.
I opened the door and saw the light;
No longer darkness filling the night.
My son was knocking, knocking my door,
Love makes sunshine hard to ignore.
Happy, laughing, no more pain,
No more sadness or gone insane.
If your puzzle is resolved,
All your problems will be solved.

Haloo
6/7/15

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 2/17/2016 12:03:00 PM
Hi Pashang, another excellent write from your pen. I did follow every line with trepidation. You lead us through these fearful thoughts with the poets skill. I see this was for a contest Pashang, a very belated congratulations on your placement in the contest. A seven for this excellent work....Vlad.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 2/17/2016 2:17:00 PM
My friend Raven, forget about contest and placements. Its good to have friends that they can appreciate your thoughts . Since you have read a lot of my work, i invite you to read my Samara 1 and 2. Samara is name for flying seeds. It is little long, I had to put in two parts. Read it, if you absolutely nothing to read. Hope you like it... You are the true Edgar Allen Poe's Raven...cheers
Date: 1/8/2016 11:58:00 PM
PASHANG, Congrats on your win. ~LINDA~
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Date: 1/4/2016 10:02:00 AM
PASHANG, Congrats on your "Who is Knocking at my Door? WIN... Luv **SKAT**
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Date: 11/2/2015 10:18:00 PM
A puzzle in deed. Very nice! Never attempted this fork before. I may give a try one day. Peace and blessings my friend
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 11/3/2015 12:21:00 AM
Thank you, all power to you... If the puzzle is resolved, All problems will be solved.
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