Who I Was
you knew who I was
for years I perfected my cause
left overseas to a new land
in beer tents I made a stand
love lost on the wicks end
crept in slowly as a friend
past ripped and tore me
from a boy to a man
and gave me hope to carry on
you did everything to please me
my life changed but my mind was my own
you condoned my drink
i degraded you in an evil tone
used the accident to medicate
my life I lost and no one to direct
sought threw poetry and drunken intellect
all these expectation of me
tired of the man you think I should be
i can’t do this on my own
need a miracle a new thing
picked up the phone
you answered on the first ring
“hi my name is bruce and I’m an alcoholic”
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