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Who I Am - Updated Poetry Contest

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Who I am, Lord? You know me more than I know me for You see and understand the part or side of me, I do not. I was nurtured with love, attentive care in my early childhood by Mommy, the aunt who raised me, grandparents and other aunts and their support laid the foundation of my being. I was six, when my parents and two brothers came to live with us and I discerned that not everyone will like you and life is unfair through Mama, my own mother. She was cold, distant and did not care about me. Never understood why, but learned to accept to respect and obey my mother.

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Date: 12/26/2024 10:16:00 AM
Marilene, congratulations on your win in my Who Am I Contest, wonderfully penned, well done, Constance
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Marilene Evans
Date: 12/26/2024 12:23:00 PM
Thanks so much for my placement and your comment. Happy Holidays, Constance. Hope you had a joyful Christmas. Blessings.
Date: 12/9/2024 3:48:00 PM
Rough starts in life are common in this world. Soon, under God's kingdom no one will ever get a rough start again
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Marilene Evans
Date: 12/9/2024 4:39:00 PM
Thanks for visiting, Tom. I agree with you, if you go to Heaven, in God's kingdom. Happy Holidays! Blessings.

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