Who Dare Stops This Bleeding

Who Dare Stops This Bleeding? 

Once upon a time
I heard it time, time
From the horse's mouth
That Love is imbedded in Sacrifice

So, I started without wasting any time
Building my heart without a dyme
Every day and month
I put a stone of Sacrifice

My building was in its  prime
When I decided to have a  past time
And i saw people with different mouths
Especially about Love and Sacrifice

And, from that time
I started experiencing tough times
They forcefully shut up my mouth
Mankind refused to discuss Sacrifice

It soon turned lime
You understand, sour thyme 
Relationships last only months
Because of lost of Sacrifice

That was the last line
Of my story time
My heart is bleeding for months
Now, and no one is ready to make a Sacrifice

Wont you stop this bleeding
Perhaps with your blood dripping
To share my fate of peeping
Into a faithful Love, by sacrificing

#LEARNERSPEN  Muharam, 1439

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 9/27/2017 2:31:00 PM
There is a lot of sacrificing in a marriage But it is worth it when the marriage is a good one.have faith. Have a good day my friend.
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Date: 11/28/2017 12:57:00 AM
Thanks, Darlene
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