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Who Cares

When rain took me away, And you saw the petals dropping one by one: Life was too busy creating music Close to heart. And just bothered to drown you.

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/10/2012 2:00:00 PM

You have written an interesting poem. Have a wonderful new week. oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Umme Salma Alam
Date: 9/11/2012 9:42:00 AM

:) thanks Anne! that means a lot to me! Wish you too!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/10/2012 12:34:00 PM

a visual this created in my mind such beauty to this write, a joy to read,....p.d.

Umme Salma Alam
Date: 9/11/2012 9:45:00 AM

Thanks a lot p . d. for your so inspiring comment ! :)