Who Cares

When rain took me away,

And you saw the petals dropping one by one:

Life was too busy creating music

Close to heart.

And just bothered to drown you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Andresen Avatar
September 10, 2012 at 2:00 PM
You have written an interesting poem. Have a wonderful new week. oxox love Anne-Lise :)
Alam Avatar
September 11, 2012 at 9:42 AM
:) thanks Anne! that means a lot to me! Wish you too!
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September 10, 2012 at 12:34 PM
a visual this created in my mind such beauty to this write, a joy to read,....p.d.
Alam Avatar
September 11, 2012 at 9:45 AM
Thanks a lot p . d. for your so inspiring comment ! :)
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