Who Can We Truly Trust

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Soul passion is not a simple task. This is grasped as a soulful bask, To reserve one's sound mind and soul, To your loved ones, but not a hack. They set down those blessed vows as rule, In a precise scheme, that's the goal, Since the pen-pusher by now knew, I don't dismiss the budding role. Spot our bloodline evolved and grew, When our souls stand, sorely renew, Our feelings may become muddled, With the one, we esteem for true. Life's chore complications crumbled, May seldom grasp its rate stumbled, And shepherd a partner or spouse, Too wide, gloom, and bleak shaft fumbled. Although, we relinquish word swears, To be prized, esteemed with obeys, to discard each other as well, our arduous traipse continues. Our sound bodies are shaped well, that's why many of us can tell, In the sort of low dust and grime, Into the scum of smeared lust, dull. So, within, there is creed sublime, Stumbles is near the end of time, It discloses straight to our thoughts, And unholy erects in slime. Attempting to maintain our wrought, Is challenging without a brought, One should reach out to the other, And squabbles should be held as naught. Such misgivings may be utter, Despite this, your tongue is tender, Those who have shown anxiety, have a rough time seemly hover. Ne'er deem without proof utterly, Or to be selfish and greedy, Doubt is a marked first point of this, We judge that evil eats, truly. Don't put your faith in people's glitz, Since he, too, is made of brain blitz, Believe in God with all your heart, He'll view through, stow you on the ritz.
Written: May 11, 2022

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 5/12/2022 3:16:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your work. Creative way to go with this one. I am glad that I chose this one to read today. Thanks for your visit. Sara
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Date: 5/12/2022 11:20:00 AM
A gifted pen, you use wisely, no matter what and when, you always make us happy. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer
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Date: 5/12/2022 6:59:00 AM
A well-crafted poem, my friend, Lasaad! Loved it. A Fave!
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Date: 5/11/2022 10:38:00 PM
Splendid. You seem to write with ease. And perfect rhyme which I lack.
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Date: 5/11/2022 2:34:00 PM
WOW! You write these long poems with such ease--despite the syllable and rhyme constraints. Kudos my friend for your gifted pen.
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