Who Assumes Responsibility

Armed to the teeth, but not in the head 
Soon the ground will be covered with dead 

Shooting and fighting, explosions galore 
Wounded fall to the ground, see the blood pour 

Technology making the casualties increase 
It seems that our warlike nature won’t cease 

Skirmishes and battles, the war has no end 
Doctors perform triage, some wounded they mend 

Confidence slipping away from the troops every hour 
Brute force and ammunition, the measure of power 

Each side has their losses but keep fighting on 
The reason for war is all a big con 

Economy the reason, false causes the shield 
Covered up by the blood of the dead on the field 

Stone cold, committed, their expression soon thaws 
Enlisted, now dying for another man’s cause
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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October 9, 2013 at 9:04 AM
Eric, Epic in deed! Oh, my who will walk this place if all responsibilities are never handled. war is only the beginning, never the end. corrupt is how it seems. surely looking forward in reading. more from you...Linda.
Niehoff Avatar
October 9, 2013 at 2:26 PM
Thanks!
Davis Avatar
October 9, 2013 at 8:55 AM
Wow. This is a powerful and deep write. The reader is taken on a journey of war and soldiers life. A roller coaster of emotion. nice job
Niehoff Avatar
October 9, 2013 at 2:25 PM
Thank you!
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