Who Are You

Who are you





A fragrant breeze
to be felt close,
The sweetest red rose
cuddling its origin,
Kindest of heart
that has a healing touch,
Reflector to sunshine 
and nurture positive mind,

All what I am not
and just trying to be..

But surely I am ...
a nature lover
Pleading to preserve its beauty,
a human being
Far from hatred just caring,
a heart that believes
In equality for all life,

Longing for ...
peace and not wars,
no discrimination to colour 
caste and religion,
no exploitation or killing,

Am I a theoriser
an idealist or an escapist ?
For readers to decide ...



Written April 5th, 2016
For contest by Catie
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Ashe Avatar
April 22, 2016 at 6:43 PM
This is a thoughtful piece and in response to the last stanza, a beautiful hearted person! Thank you for your visit and comment! :-)
A   Avatar
April 10, 2016 at 10:43 PM
Dr Upma, Congrats in Catie Lindsey's Who are you? contest. Love LINDA
Hicks Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 9:12 PM
I haven't checked out the winner's list, but it looks like this did well! Great bio poetry here, Upma. Tenderly crafted with beautiful inner feelings. "Am I a theoriser an idealist or an escapist? For readers to decide ..." ... your open-ending was thoughtful too. A pleasure to read.
Dietrich Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 8:30 PM
very nicely done AND WON. Congrats.
Stoner Jr Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 8:12 PM
Congratulations Dr U on a most enjoyable work. I especially enjoyed your form and presentation as much as your message. The read is economical of word but most rich in message, well done. I must say you validated my impression of you, that's a good thing :0)
Turner Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 8:08 PM
Upma, I knew all of this already just from reading your poems. Congratulations for this wonderful write. Even if it is a small section of the list of beautiful qualities you possess. Peace Doc:):)
Parmale Avatar
April 6, 2016 at 9:28 PM
You are very beautiful Human being lady!!! Very honest and sweet write Upama.....
Hull Avatar
April 6, 2016 at 6:09 PM
Conjures nice imagery and a powerful message alongside, what more could a poet aspire too, well done.
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