Who Are We At Our Core - NFC

Perhaps
The remnant
of the one celled amoeba
Still transcending the primordial ooze 
Sucking sustenance from the
Oozing awakening
Of life
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Goldsmith Avatar
December 28, 2023 at 1:55 PM
I enjoyed reading your write/great ending. Good Luck in the contest... "Happy New Year 2024" .................
Hind Avatar
December 27, 2023 at 6:20 PM
Interesting; I'm more of a transcendentalist person, lol. But I liked this...it made me think of God and how we should be grateful of small things...we are specks in a great universe. Great write!
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December 26, 2023 at 8:28 AM
Always like your alternative poetry John.. its really quirky!
Rodrigues Avatar
December 26, 2023 at 7:32 AM
Wow…oozing with discontent…rough imagery but great write.
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