Who Are We At Our Core

We wear a smile to hide,
the tears we wear inside.
Our laughter we have applied,
feeling it will be our guide.
Life is but a wild ride,
filled with how we have lied.
One's beliefs can be set aside,
when one choose to backslide.
Have lies been our guide,
watch out it will make you cross-eyed.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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George Avatar
December 22, 2023 at 4:02 AM
Life is a wild ride. You have rightly put it, dear Paula....! Some times we fall and get bruised. Some times we fare ahead. But we always hide our tears with a smile. We wear masks and tell lies that we are happy. So the core of our heart is hidden from the out side world. Enjoyed your beautifully rhyming poem. All the Best.
Goldsmith Avatar
December 22, 2023 at 1:43 PM
Great to see you. Thanks for your note. Glad you found this to be a beautifully rhyming poem. Yes, many wear a mask/tell lies that they are happy with a smile to hide their pain/hurt. Life is a very wild ride... Merry Christmas..................... 
Jayasankar Avatar
December 19, 2023 at 9:10 AM
Joys and tears...are like crest and trough of the waves of our lives... Loved reading your insights on the theme 'Who we are... " dear Paula... Best wishes and hugs... ~ Ani
Goldsmith Avatar
December 20, 2023 at 9:14 AM
Great to see you. Thanks for your note and for your best wishes. Glad you loved this write. Yes, life is made up of many joys/tears. Have a blessed/wonderful day............
Canerdy Avatar
December 19, 2023 at 7:14 AM
Yes, sometimes a smile serves as a mask, and we're not always 100 percent honest. NO ONE is. Very expressive piece, Paula. Janice
Goldsmith Avatar
December 19, 2023 at 7:41 AM
Great to see you. Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed it. Yes, many wear a mask with a smile to hide the pain/hurt. Have a blessed/wonderful day............
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December 19, 2023 at 5:39 AM
Who Are We At Our Core~Date Written:12/19/2024
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