Who Are Me

Who are you Like the days you change Maybe you are the product of my destruction My lies, tied to broken promises Merged together with our most painful memories Ashes as the sand and lava as the waves You as my breathe I'm poisoned by the thought That I did this to you

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Gail Lewis

Date: 8/22/2016 1:12:00 PM

Brings to life the fact that your here because of your past I like it - you do need to however present it how its read. Great read thankyou.

Skat A

Date: 7/10/2016 11:03:00 PM

NICE TO SEE AGAIN, IT'S SO NICE IF YOU COME BACK TO PosT AGAIN. SKAT

Skat A

Date: 6/13/2016 3:53:00 PM

Joi J, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**

Joi Jones
Date: 6/14/2016 12:47:00 AM

Thanks

Moon Flower

Date: 6/13/2016 11:54:00 AM

That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Joi. :)

Joi Jones
Date: 6/14/2016 12:48:00 AM

Thanks

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/12/2016 9:22:00 PM

Good question, Joi J,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@