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Who Am I To Question Any Soul

Who are you that loved me from afar Yet did forsake me when the night came down? Who are you that loved a distant star Was Bethlehem your hoped for little town? Who am I to question any soul When I have done bad deeds when overwhelmed? Who am I to seek another whole When I have lingered long in sorrow’s realms? Who is God that he should seek us out When we’ve ignored his messengers and saints? Who is God and why do we have doubts? The world’s his canvas which our evil taints. Should we not seek leaders of more worth? Instead we fall to savagery and doubt

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Date: 12/11/2016 12:39:00 PM
I like the that the couplet (surprisingly) doesn't rhyme. Ties into your theme of human imperfection, reinforcing the incompleteness of our potential. Nice write!
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Katherine Braithwaite
Date: 12/11/2016 1:53:00 PM
Thank you very much,Jeremy.I did it twice today but never before.I am glad you noticed and liked that

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