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Who Am I

Didactic desire drives down deluge of thoughts My memories mingle with this pelter … Now, Populism drives the thought process Commune takes communal way Poverty in conscious Another deluge is due Noah is making the ship Getting ready for the trip God picks the chosen few All vague barriers being washed away by flood - a new beginning brings joy through the bleeding tears; A new born asks, “Who am I?” 03.09.16 1. First stanza : Epigram, unrhymed - 2. Second stanza : Kimo, 3 lines, 10/7/6 syllables 3. Third stanza : Enclosed Rhyme, 4 lines, a/b/b/a 4. Fourth stanza : Tanka, 5 lines, 5/7/5/7/7

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Date: 9/9/2016 11:25:00 AM
Anindya, congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful write ~
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Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 9/9/2016 2:28:00 PM
Thanks a lot Constance.... Hugs, Bobby
Date: 9/9/2016 9:06:00 AM
Congrats on your win dear Anindya Mohan, excellent write, kudos, Anu:)
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Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 9/9/2016 2:27:00 PM
Thanks a lot Anu... Hugs, Bobby
Date: 9/9/2016 7:50:00 AM
Anindya, so well written dear friend....congrats on your placement! :)-luloo
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Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 9/9/2016 2:26:00 PM
Thanks a lot Luloo... Hugs, Bobby

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