Who Am I

Didactic desire drives down deluge of thoughts
My memories mingle with this pelter …

Now, Populism drives the thought process
Commune takes communal way
Poverty in conscious

Another deluge is due
Noah is making the ship
Getting ready for the trip
God picks the chosen few

All vague barriers
being washed away by flood -
a new beginning 
brings joy through the bleeding tears;
A new born asks, “Who am I?”

03.09.16



1.  First stanza : Epigram, unrhymed -
  
2. Second stanza : Kimo, 3 lines, 10/7/6 syllables

3. Third stanza : Enclosed Rhyme, 4 lines, a/b/b/a

4.  Fourth stanza : Tanka, 5 lines, 5/7/5/7/7
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La France Avatar
September 9, 2016 at 11:25 AM
Anindya, congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful write ~
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September 9, 2016 at 2:28 PM
Thanks a lot Constance.... Hugs, Bobby
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September 9, 2016 at 9:06 AM
Congrats on your win dear Anindya Mohan, excellent write, kudos, Anu:)
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September 9, 2016 at 2:27 PM
Thanks a lot Anu... Hugs, Bobby
Scars Avatar
September 9, 2016 at 7:50 AM
Anindya, so well written dear friend....congrats on your placement! :)-luloo
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September 9, 2016 at 2:26 PM
Thanks a lot Luloo... Hugs, Bobby
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