Who Am I

I'm a child
 forlorn
Already born
Into misery
and slavery
Then a God
the true and
only God
whispered
to me
Child you must
quit looking
so forlorn
I'm shedding 
my tears
 in your pain
Appreciate
people along
life's way who
will spill
your pain
and cry
with you
for that's
when you know 
my pity is with
you 
moving people 
to tears because
that is how I 
feel about you
I'm sending
my love to you
through my creation
Hold on my dear  child
that looks so forlorn
Your are being
reborn by my
creation of a
new you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Ashe Avatar
July 14, 2016 at 8:38 PM
You have written a truth here that is very much need to be read by all! HE spoke through you in the writing of this piece! More!
Bohto Avatar
July 14, 2016 at 9:06 PM
I know it in my soul. What a powerful and tender hearted God we have. What a spiritually moving experience. I talked to him through my poem the pier of my true God and he answered me back. WOW. Thanks Walter.
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