Who Am I

I'm a tourist of my own world;
a tourist re-visiting the joys, pains,
celebrations, frustrations.....that I
had lived in my previous worlds.
The ruins and remains exist as memories
and feelings.
I silently create and destroy my worlds
without any one ever noticing - yes, 
silent big-bangs....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Gazbowski Avatar
April 13, 2016 at 12:29 AM
Esoteric masterpiece Teddy.
Hicks Avatar
April 5, 2016 at 1:52 AM
Sounds like there's a "multi-verse" going on inside your head, Teddy! A most intriguing way to do a bio ... I think most of us spend far more time living in our heads, and this poem is an example of that ... "silent big-bangs" ... I don't think anyone has ever used this phrase before. Lol. Best of luck.
Kimathi Avatar
April 5, 2016 at 3:35 AM
Lolest. Thanks Timothy. It seems we are silent creators in our own right....
Bbb Avatar
April 2, 2016 at 5:08 AM
that i feel also! nice description! ;)
Kimathi Avatar
April 2, 2016 at 5:29 AM
Thank you so much Salamandr!!! ;-)
Dietrich Avatar
April 1, 2016 at 6:59 PM
very creative thinking here. I really like how you did this!!
Kimathi Avatar
April 2, 2016 at 5:28 AM
Thanks Andrea!!! *^_^*
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