Who Am I 1

WHO AM I

Who am I anyway; a hare-brained mongrel?
A tree lightning struck on sedate shores?
Deadwood burnt lying in the grave of forgetting?
A firefly turned into scorching torch?
Or thunder challenged screaming at the lightning?

Today I am in the sky where a red sword
From a  swarthy ocean furiously flashed
Between blasting billows of earth’s passion
Am I not my friend fearing this sword-thrust
Into this far sky coalescing into
My black blood’s steady vermillion whisper

Where is the truth that deliquesces not
At my patient inquest into this burn
Its never healing itch and identity
The rain soaked bird and its song is sunk
The river is in flood, my thirst is but quenched
I strain to break through my birth-bonding skeins


By  S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: Written about 20 years back

For Gautami Phookan's contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Jones Avatar
January 2, 2014 at 9:02 PM
Awesome Jag....congratulations
Dietrich Avatar
December 25, 2013 at 11:25 PM
20 years ago and SO GOOD!!! Congrats again!
Lamoureux Avatar
December 24, 2013 at 4:31 PM
I think you are you but you may wish to get a second I pinion. Congratulations on a fine entry.
Oyewole Avatar
December 24, 2013 at 8:17 AM
Big congrats to you on your winning poem!
Mehta Avatar
December 24, 2013 at 12:10 AM
Enjoyed your beautiful write on a portrait of a poet and congratulations on the win, Jagath
Dillard Avatar
December 23, 2013 at 6:47 PM
And the search for our true identities continues throughout the days of our lives. Congrats on your super performance with this meaningful selection. RAY
Phookan Avatar
December 23, 2013 at 12:38 PM
Congrats SJ on your fabulous win with this beautifully written poem! Enjoyed your work immensely. Thank you so much for your participation.. Best wishes, gautami
Onclaud Avatar
July 26, 2011 at 7:25 AM
fantastic, SJ...special KUDOS to you for the superb win!...huggs
Dietrich Avatar
July 25, 2011 at 9:55 PM
wow, yours is certainly the most dramatic and creative of the bunch! Congrats on this unique poem winning in the contest.
Brown Avatar
July 25, 2011 at 8:39 AM
Congratulations on your win in Tracie's "Getting to know you" contest S. Love, Carol
Onclaud Avatar
July 24, 2011 at 2:54 PM
a round of sparkling cheers for your great win, SJ! :)huggs!
Sweetheart Avatar
July 24, 2011 at 2:13 PM
Congrats SJ on your big win with this insightful poetry on u luv...
Guzzi Avatar
July 11, 2011 at 8:54 PM
great write [form Free Verse/ Blank verse has meter ;)] loved this line "Deadwood burnt lying in the grave of forgetting?" I was wondering pretty please if you'd given me a contest entry? If not please do! Light & Love
Chamberson Avatar
June 26, 2011 at 9:30 PM
Well, well, well....You've done it again!I love the fact that my mind runs wild when I read your poems. So many images infuse my head every time! I may not be the first to comment on this, but I defiantly will NOT be the last!-AddieThornton
Mehta Avatar
June 24, 2011 at 8:59 AM
Lovely self introspective expressions, S.J
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