Who Am I?

Who am I?
Who are you?
Who are they?
I wish I knew. 
We all feel pain 
even though wounds
are technically inexcusable. 
We patch up scars and make
them functional and reusable.
Oh the blood underneath these veins,
the flesh antagonizes me for days.
I'd poke it with something sharp 
if I weren't so vain. 
Plus looking at the imprints 
it would cause would drive me insane. 
There could be a cloudless sky
but still it may rain 
Never judge a book
maybe until you turn the page
I wish I had something, someone 
or just maybe a it. 
Pain is excruciating but It's mass 
produced like McDonald's so I'm used to it
It's the repetitive nature of it all that 
makes people loose a tooth or two 
they can't pick, swallow or chew the truth 
so they bottle it up and chug it like a fresh cold root 
I take it in and blow it out like a flute 
such beauty can come from ugly things 
that's why so many beautiful girls 
let their boy friends call them ugly names 
I spin in a circle and when I return it's all the same
Who am I? Who is she? who are we?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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