Who Am I

small dot centred within
a circle of infinite radius

we are both
both are one

the questioner disappears
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Goldsmith Avatar
July 5, 2023 at 11:15 AM
Few words with much said. Powerful... Have a blessed day...............
Seeker Avatar
July 5, 2023 at 6:47 PM
Thank you, dear Paula
Narain Avatar
July 5, 2023 at 9:46 AM
Deep thought. We are all small dots in the universe.
Seeker Avatar
July 5, 2023 at 6:47 PM
Or we may say, the universe is in us
Buhagiar Avatar
July 5, 2023 at 8:41 AM
Loved this. I compare myself to a grain of sand trying to understand a vast ocean.
Seeker Avatar
July 5, 2023 at 9:20 AM
Bullseye!
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