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See ye not yet, we're hypnotised by desires, so our soul's capsized. Stillness side-steps illusion net. We're hypnotised. See ye not yet? We’re not the mind, we're not this form. We're not the currents, cool or warm. We’re living light, blissful and kind. We're not this form, we're not the mind. 17-February-2023 Swap Quatrain

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Date: 2/17/2023 5:50:00 AM
Seeker, this is just fantastic work that is a delight to read. Your work is made even more beautiful by the wondrous diction and metaphors you use.
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