Unseeking Seeker Poet Quatrain

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Who Am I

See ye not yet, we're hypnotised
by desires, so our soul's capsized.
Stillness side-steps illusion net.
We're hypnotised. See ye not yet?

We’re not the mind, we're not this form.
We're not the currents, cool or warm.
We’re living light, blissful and kind.
We're not this form, we're not the mind.

17-February-2023
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Sotto Poet February 17, 2023 at 5:50 AM Seeker, this is just fantastic work that is a delight to read. Your work is made even more beautiful by the wondrous diction and metaphors you use.