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Who Am I

We oft ask ourself, the purpose of life
For desire pursuit, makes us not bliss rife

Pause awhile to ask who in truth we are
Driven by instincts, we’ve drifted afar

Deadened to conscience, how will we reform 
Blind lead the blind; in stupor we conform

We’re worldly wise but heart has contracted
From path of love and light, soul’s detracted

Who’s the stranger we see in the mirror
Cold heart allows not love to draw nearer

Why inner conflict, like Jekyll and Hyde
In our palm too, head and heart lines divide

Religion too offers us no relief 
We’re asked not to question imposed belief

Why do we fear the unknown and occult
Time’s now to exit each and every cult

Reflect, are we not reborn, with each breath
There’s no liberation at point of death 

Save fears and desires, what thoughts do we think
Trauma bonding thus, no wonder we sink

The path then seems clear, as to how to start
First things first, let us meld head with our heart

No sooner head and heart act hand in glove
Boundless grace in-pours; we’re suffused with love

Dropping thought, we become a child again
So easy it is, to break ego’s chain

Analysing not fulcrum of a sneeze 
Delight in effervescence of release 

Choosing stillness as our default fulcrum 
We hark within heart, the soundless bliss drum

Oh weary hermit, embrace the vast void
Once heart’s love drenched, we’re never by fears toyed

Seeing life in motion, what’s there to clasp
In blissful wonder,  just let out a gasp

How may we garner truth, if we resist
Know we are living light and a love mist

Questions cease as we become the answer
Transmuted as the divine bliss dancer 

14-August-2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022


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Date: 8/15/2022 7:21:00 PM
The penultimate line says it all, Seeker. I believe that your answer is correct. And the proof is that 'questions cease...'
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Date: 8/15/2022 7:31:00 PM
Ah! You have a knack to separate the wheat from the chaff, gw :)
Date: 8/14/2022 12:00:00 PM
I like when you write like this, pondering and using rhyme. Good one, Seeker.
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Date: 8/14/2022 6:42:00 PM
Thanks Andrea!
Date: 8/14/2022 4:25:00 AM
Such thought provoking lines full of wisdom.. Seeker... Loved your couplets that rhyme so well... Thank you for sharing... Have a blessed day... ~ Ani
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Date: 8/14/2022 4:54:00 AM
Thank you, Anitha
Date: 8/14/2022 2:46:00 AM
It will not be the first time man gets doubts on his existence. The New Testament is my bible.
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Date: 8/14/2022 4:54:00 AM
Great! Keep the faith, Victor
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