Who Am I - Nk

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gripped in life's bind we inquire who we are till we tire our search foiled seems we have in vain toiled employing mind exhausted we choose surrender poised at our heart centre sans thought we are at peace feeling bliss beats canter love enabled we rise simply by being still each life breath a surprise pulsating as soundless thunder 26-August-2022 HMS Charlie New-Ku Poetry Contest Sponsor: Charles Messina

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/21/2022 4:28:00 AM

Creative winning work in this one on the winners' list. Way to go. Congratulations. Sara

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 10/21/2022 7:57:00 AM

Thank you, Sara

Christuraj Alex

Date: 10/19/2022 9:42:00 AM

A great philosophical question beautifully treated. Congratulations!

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 10/21/2022 7:57:00 AM

Thank you, Chris

Charles Messina

Date: 10/18/2022 3:40:00 PM

U.S., Nice job on this form. Wonderful poetry my dear friend. "Lovely" Congratulations on your win in my contest! Charlie

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 10/18/2022 7:12:00 PM

Thanks for hosting this innovative contest, Charles. Delighted that you enjoyed the write, always a pleasure to participate in your contests.

Catie Lindsey

Date: 8/26/2022 10:21:00 AM

I like this one, I have heard, very recently that God says we need our twin flames for this because on Earth it is the greatest love we can know. Very inspiring. Thank you for stopping by and commenting on my poem. I am going to post a few more later. :-)

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 8/26/2022 5:41:00 PM

It’s bliss, self-existent Catie. Twin flames (different from soul mates) are our energetic (energy) counterparts, which when fused makes Ardhnarishwar ~ https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ardhanarishvara. We may liken it to male-female polarity balance of an out of form chakra (beyond the conventional seven).