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Who Am I - Nk

gripped in life's bind
we inquire
who we are
till we tire
our search foiled
seems we have
in vain toiled
employing mind

exhausted we choose surrender
poised at our heart centre
sans thought we are at peace
feeling bliss beats canter
love enabled we rise
simply by being still
each life breath a surprise
pulsating as soundless thunder

26-August-2022

HMS

Charlie New-Ku Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Charles Messina

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Sara Kendrick Date: 10/21/2022 4:28:00 AM Creative winning work in this one on the winners' list. Way to go. Congratulations. Sara Login to Reply Unseeking Seeker Date: 10/21/2022 7:57:00 AM Thank you, Sara

Christuraj Alex Date: 10/19/2022 9:42:00 AM A great philosophical question beautifully treated. Congratulations! Login to Reply Unseeking Seeker Date: 10/21/2022 7:57:00 AM Thank you, Chris

Charles Messina Date: 10/18/2022 3:40:00 PM U.S., Nice job on this form. Wonderful poetry my dear friend. "Lovely" Congratulations on your win in my contest! Charlie Login to Reply Unseeking Seeker Date: 10/18/2022 7:12:00 PM Thanks for hosting this innovative contest, Charles. Delighted that you enjoyed the write, always a pleasure to participate in your contests.

Catie Lindsey Date: 8/26/2022 10:21:00 AM I like this one, I have heard, very recently that God says we need our twin flames for this because on Earth it is the greatest love we can know. Very inspiring. Thank you for stopping by and commenting on my poem. I am going to post a few more later. :-) Login to Reply Unseeking Seeker Date: 8/26/2022 5:41:00 PM It’s bliss, self-existent Catie. Twin flames (different from soul mates) are our energetic (energy) counterparts, which when fused makes Ardhnarishwar ~ https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ardhanarishvara. We may liken it to male-female polarity balance of an out of form chakra (beyond the conventional seven).